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Post by diguinho77 on May 23, 2011 18:53:44 GMT -5
rate please.
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Post by zShenanigans on May 23, 2011 18:55:24 GMT -5
5/10. I like it, but it just doesn't look as finished or professional as some of the others I've seen.
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Post by No.8//Xannta on May 23, 2011 18:56:49 GMT -5
5/10. I like it, but it just doesn't look as finished or professional as some of the others I've seen. I agree, it's okay. Try and follow a tutorial for it. There are some major traits to userbars that you're missing there. Namely the white ellipse. |
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Post by YukiiTan on May 23, 2011 20:46:01 GMT -5
He said rate, not "compare with the other userbars". I think it's cool but I don't like the red letters so 8/10 ^-^.
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Post by zShenanigans on May 23, 2011 20:49:12 GMT -5
He said rate, not "compare with the other userbars". I think it's cool but I don't like the red letters so 8/10 ^-^. You can't rate something without a basis of comparison. If I'd only ever seen one userbar, I'd have no idea what to give it, because I'd have no idea how good it is.  Just saying. |
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Post by PokeFan Gen. 1 on May 23, 2011 21:22:40 GMT -5
Alright from a professional perspective (hehe professional....) there are a few issues. One was already named: the ellipse. Although it looks minor it is key in giving the userbar a fresh glossy look. The other is your scan lines. Way too thick. Either space them out more or lighten the opacity but it's distracting your image. Finally (and this only goes for the first bar) your image should pause. A continuous motion takes away from the awe factor of your userbars. Overall I'd have to rate them both at 6 out of 10. Your good with your animations, but there are those minor flaws. Congrats an stepping up to the userbar game though.  ***EDIT*** Also noticed the second bar is missing a gradient. That's also a key component to giving the userbar a shine effect to keep it from looking flat. (the ellipse also helps accomplish this) |
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Post by zShenanigans on May 23, 2011 21:35:58 GMT -5
And just to clarify, this is just constructive criticism. You did a great job, especially for just starting out.
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Post by diguinho77 on May 24, 2011 4:24:03 GMT -5
thnks
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Just saying.
